It's so
fun, because one week ago, I was not inspirited to do some extra-post
for getting higher grades, and I decided to search among my blog
drafts. I wanted to use them, so I corrected them. That way I
realized about my improvement.
Well,
this would be my frist post, but I didn't posted it, because I
directly sent it to my teacher:
Hey,
teacher! I’m Ana and I’m 17. This year was the first time that
there wasn’t some “Ana”
in my class. Well… until you arrived. I think that this year, my
classmates will drive me crazy, because when them
call you, I think that them
are calling me.
I’m
from Sant Pere Pescador, but I hope that we will move out to
Empuriabrava. Why? Because I love changes. I don’t like the
routine, and I’m tired of Sant Pere Pescador. My love for the
changes is very important, because I think that it’s the most
important characteristic of my personality. In the future, I just
want to travel around the world. I want to learn and try to
understand a lot of different cultures. This last summer I didn’t
work. This summer I just have enjoyed it with my friends, meeting
with them, doing a lot of sport, and becoming “Open water diver”
in diving world. So I don’t have too much things to explain about
it.
About
my experience as an English learner, I have to say that I’m so
proud. Well, I think that
I improved
so much my English since 3th of ESO. I can write a composition
without the help of a dictionary (well, maybe some words… but not
much words), and I love
write
in English. But I have a problem. When I’m doing an exam, I get
very nervous and I do a lot of stupid mistakes.
About
the differences...
Personal
pronouns: I was using “them” (object) instead of “they”
(subject).
Using
wrongly some verb tenses. Infinitive (TO write)/Present Perfect (I
have improved).
I
analyzed the content, the structure and the language, and with the
help of the grids, I graded my own text. The grade would be 7'7. The
structure is well done, but as I said, I did some grammar mistakes.
About the vocabulary, I use expressions like “Drive me crazy”,
conditionals...
So, as
a conclusion, I see differences between my first post and my last
post.
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